会员作品

• 作品名称：All I Wanted
• 音乐风格：流行 摇滚
• 作品属性：原创作品
• 我做的事情：编曲 混音 录音 演奏 作词 作曲
• 作曲：Terry
• 作词：Terry
• 编曲：Terry
• 演唱：Catherine
• 演奏：吉他：Terry & Bill
•            贝司：Ben
•            鼓：Terry
• 录音/混音：Terry

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All I Wanted
when i close my eyes the past flow up my mind
all the little but senses you did in my life
every day and night you always by my side
promised that you'll never leave me behind he~ e~

but since time goes by everything changed inside
all the happiness never existed from that time
as the last goodbye even how hard i tried
till the end of time and i realized
our love reached the end no longer survived

all i wanted was to hold you tight
all i wanted was a reason please tell me why
all i wanted was the feeling i can't deny
because i really need you tonight

if i close my eyes i can see your smile
once upon a time how wonderful world in my life
however time goes by everything becomes to lies
i can't run and hide cause' still in my mind
oh baby can you give me one more time

all i wanted was to hold you tight
all i wanted was a reason please tell me why
all i wanted was the feeling i can't deny
because i really need you tonight

if i could back to the past
i shouldn't let you go
if you need me i will be there yeah ~


all i wanted was to hold you tight
all i wanted was a reason please tell me why
all i wanted was the feeling i can't deny
but can't you hear me cry?
woo o~o yeah ~ yeah ~
hold you tight please tell me why i can't deny
because i really need you tonight

when i close my eyes missing you all the time
after we said goodbye

为什么鼓的踩叉一直在声向的右边啊？还是我监听有问题哦

很正常啊，楼主以观众的角度摆放的吧

踩镲在左，订订镲在右。欧美的摇滚乃至重金属都是这样的

音准还是要稍微修一下

这个还不如你前面那个小女生的声音。前面那个训练一下会好很多，这个声音质感不够！

呵呵，抱歉，对金属了解的比较少。露怯了哈

嗯，我一直都是观众角度摆放，这有什么问题吗？求教~~~

都是真家伙呀？支持一下

楼主方便留个联系方式吗，我也是佛山的，请教问题！！

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明天发另外一首，她们两把声音对比一下，看看大家更喜欢哪个声音。
感谢支持

只是觉得左右的两道失真吉他有点乱腾 在1分钟左右时 刚进两道失真的时候 再加上人声 有点听不出主次的感觉的了 觉得是左边这道失真的节奏型不好 太跳跃了 像是在附和鼓的节奏型了  有些不扎实的倾向  仅是个人意见啊

[ 本帖最后由 我是老大 于 13-3-3 00:04 编辑 ]

这女声有点气力不足的感觉。

吉他两边弹的虽然和弦一样但扫弦方式完全不同，我有这样的构思是因为本来是乐队玩的，两边吉他不同才有BAND FEEL，后来录音没改，没注意到这问题，出来后就有点乱的感觉，这个我也认同。

整体有点乏力