会员作品

• 作品名称：sappy-中文可以译作“傻逼”。。。
• 音乐风格：摇滚
• 作品属性：练习之作
• 我做的事情：混音
• 演唱：涅槃乐队
• 演奏：涅槃乐队
• 录音/混音：我

附上歌词：And if you save yourself
You will make him happy

He'll keep you in a jar
And you'll think you're happy
He'll give you breathing holes
And you'll think you’re happy
He'll cover you with grass
And you'll think you're happy
Now

You're really in a laundry room
You're really in a laundry room
Conclusion came to you
Ahh

And if you cut yourself
You will think you're happy
He'll keep you in a jar
And you'll make him happy
He'll give you breather holes
And you'll think you're happy
He'll cover you with grass
And you'll think you're happy
Now

You're really in a laundry room
You're really in a laundry room
Conclusion came to you
Ahh

You're really in a laundry room
You're really in a laundry room
Conclusion came to you
Ahh

And if you fool yourself
You will make him happy
He'll keep you in a jar
And you'll think you're happy
He'll give you breather holes
And you will seem happy
You'll wallow in your shit
And you'll think you're happy
Now

You're really in a laundry room
You're really in a laundry room
You're really in a laundry room
Conclusion came to you
Ahh

这里请大神拍砖的同时也顺便求职。。。本人找个录音助理的工作，应届生，工作地点不限，有意向的可以留下邮箱，我好投简历=。=我豁出老脸了！！！

作为一个连头像都没有的潜水员，发帖鸭梨不知有多大。

所有的乐器都表现无力，好好的一首HARD ROCK。。。

唱的很好啊
就是伴奏不太凶

声音倒是比较均衡 就是层次感差了点  声场再开点   可能跟你的监听关系很大  显得浑浊 无力

混成了噪音

没修音高

第一次混摇滚没什么经验啊，能说得具体一点吗？

我确实也有感觉。。而且吉他做的也不是很干净，不知道该怎么弄啊

同感！！在乐器表现力和整体效果的度我确实把握的不够好。。技术有待提高呀

是有点噪，而且也不够硬。。。正如楼上说的。。没有hard rock的感觉了。。有什么好的建议吗？

这个，说实话，如果是作为“作业”来说的话，是不及格的。


一，混响参数不对，你调的这个“排练房”混响相当蛋疼，又脏又闷，听着廉价得很，所有乐器包括人声全都靠后了，像是在总轨上直接insert了一个混响似的
二，很多乐器的压缩参数不对，或者干脆就没有压缩，加上稀奇古怪的eq，没有某个乐器是“清晰，有力”的

好犀利的回复，学习了。

去听smells like teen spirit，模仿它的音色和比例去做，初学混音的话，别一上来就搞这么大的工程，没有循序渐进的学习，混出来的东西很吓人。